The painting feel and style is wonderful and you did an excellent job on both dipper, nervous in the dark woods. The subtle addition of him pulling at his collar makes a big difference in getting the full effect across, not that his face wouldn't on it sown. It also shows that you're good at drawing hands instead of trying to hide them like most people do.
Woods look great too, and I love that the place is remote enough to see the stars through the branches; meanwhile the fireflies are a sweet effect. This is the first year in my area where there haven't been any in the parks that I could find; no evil glowing red eyes in the darkest places either.
Beautiful work. I look forward to seeing more of what you do.